You've got jokes...
now you need to learn be get a lill' better in flash and you will be famous on newgrounds ;).
make more with better animation.
The graphic and the animation could use a little more work but the dialogues were funny as hell!
it was awesome!!!!
it was awesome, and you are a really good artist. also, i especially liked the scene of the monologue, that he did. it was great. it reminded me of some of the epic movies, i have seen. it was great.good job, sir. it was good.