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I liked it fairly well....and it's apparent english isn't his first lanugage...and if you wanna know what his native language is...LOOK AT HIS NAME...David Garcia...I would assume his native language is spanish. But this is fairly cool other than the random grammer things.

And this should have a higher rating on it, there are adult themes in this and they're not listed under the content.

make more

you are the master

the legend of zelda a link to the past is my favourite game ever made :)

stay in school

maybe if you wrote in proper english...
What’s your native language?

i think this should be rated mature

but otherwise i think it was good

1 word for you:

Grammar.

But on a more serious note, I thought it was alright. I saw the first episode before this one, and the series isn't bad. I was disappointed that you went in the penis direction for humor though. Things can be funny without penises.