Very nice
OK so you really do have something decent here, and its Unanimous that this is a highly popular entry, there is no Disinterest in this submission, as you have put down all the elements and gone even further, so nice efforts and really good entry, now ofcourse if I find anything to help I will suggest some ideas later, but sofar you have a good entry. love the "SOUND" on this piece some really nice work and very good quality.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small added fancy effects to go with the visuals and animation.
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