Bad voicing
The timing of the mouth flaps = bad. >_< It needs some serious work in that area. The graphics arn't all that great, but it's funny, so that makes up for it. I enjoyed this somewhat, please work on this before you make it into a series.
Author Comments
Well this is my first ever attempt at doing a movie in flash, I did all the drawings using a mouse (hence the crappy quality). Oh and sorry about the audio level, next time i'll use a better microphone =P
::EDIT::
Sorry about the audio going slightly out aswell... i'll try to sort that out next time to!
Not bad.......
Yeah it was okay just not really to my taste...no nudity, heavy violence or excessive swearing but okay nyway
Sand-monkey-v3 responds:
LOL! Fair enough...
It was all right...
The drawing style was rough... The animation was kind of strange... Why did he sink down as he was walking stage left? Wasn't too funny, but still, it was better than 90% of the shit on this website. Keep it up...
Not bad for your fisrt movie!
I am amazed that this is your first movie. you have much potential to make a badass catoon. however this one lacked good sound "mixing" (make all the volumes around the same tone) and was not very funny. That one background got boring after awhile. The animation was jerky.(which can be fixed by adding more Frames Per Second and get used to that) And you could have given more detail as to what was happening. other than that it was pretty good. keep improving your animating skills and i hope to see more.
Sand-monkey-v3 responds:
Thanks for the comments, this was really a "test" movie for me. Just seeing what I could get done. I actually just found a cool website with loads of great tutorials on that I will be looking through over the next few days. I'll try to make my next animation alot better! (And i'll look into that frames per seccond thing :P)
That was good.
That was really good... but I want to know what in the freak that thing was... The animation and the sounds aren't really in sync, but that's fixable... Well, there wasn't much action, but the dialogue kept it moving pretty well... the growling took up too much time though... you should at least add some more noises of chaos and crumbling... maybe an explosion here or there. Overall, it wasn't too bad though.