This is a class project me and my friend did for a visual communication class over at the good ole community college. Our class liked it and i hope you do to Just wait for it to load and hit play as i am to lazy to reopen it and add a preloader. (and as a note the woman known as Quimby is our teacher for the class and she is obsessed with macintosh computers.
((( NEEDS WORK )))
Well i hope you did ok in class but this needs work, you probably know about the filesize so i wont get into that, but you could have made some really nice backround effects aswell as many other elements that would made this flash awsome but it was not all bad i enjoyed it, just needs some work here and there, good luck...
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You die now k?
Let's hope you didn't fail that class. Why? You left the damn file too large, you could have easily compressed that to a smaller size. The sound was horrible, in regards to the damn singer screaming in the mic like he was a sexually-depraved lunatic. Some of the animations didn't even look like they were yours either, but I'll leave that to doubt.
Incoherant.
That was a long time for me to wait, for someone to scream down my ear.
You need to work on your drawing and pace a bit more. Along with the audio quality.
Something that makes a little more sense would be good, too. Even if it's just in an abstract sense. It was difficult to follow and sometimes I couldn't make out the voices.
Funny
I think it needs to be drawn and animated better though...