Talon
I loved all the action in it. I enjoyed taking the time to watch it. If anybody loves action. They will watch Talon.
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I read and respond to all reviews so please justify your score with a review, and read this.
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Talon: Episode III is finialy done. For all of your who cared I'm sorry it took so long. I also would like to clear up another thing, this is not madness. It has color, characters dont have feet, it's viewed from more than one angle, and when I started making the first Talon, Madness combat was not even out yet. And don't go saying that I took krinkles style and made it my own, because in reality, it's not his style. Any one everplayed Rayman? But I'm rambling, this movie picks up where Talon II left off. Talon is on the boat having just been betrayed by Jay and then.....
Another thing I want to clear up is the confusing story, so here's something that might make more sense:
Talon Episodes in chronological order:
Episode II
Episode III
Episode I
Episode IV
Episode V
Thanks for watching and enjoy
EclipseNine responds:
tahnks, spread the word!
sweet
loved it hour up with number 4
EclipseNine responds:
thanks, glad to hear you liked it. I've been really busy, but I am still working with flash and have been fine tuning my skills. expect number four in a few months.
hey dude
hey i think we should make a collaboration wut do ya think???
EclipseNine responds:
I'm always up for a collab, since working with other people usually creates something really unique that neither author could have done on their own. I'm in the middle of a lot of things I'm working on, so in the future, if you really want to, send me an email and with ideas on what you wanna do.
wtf
i didnt like the last one, so i was expecting you to continue the first one which is one of the best flashes ive ever seen. ever. why did you continue this bad one when you have already shown that you can be 100 times greater.
please understand that this is a constructive critisism, not an outright complaint.
EclipseNine responds:
Im gonna be honest, i dont know which one you're talking about. this particualar flash is my best scoring thus far. if you're talking about the first episode in the series, you clearly made some sort of mistake. any way, im glad your using constructive criticism, but im not sure what you're saying, if you see this drop me an email at PlatinumGuitar@aol.com and let me know what you're talking about
Look dude...
It's really great animation and a unique plot, But you REALLY need a better script, some better voice acting, and louder mics. Things like that can turn a great flash into a total sausage fest very easily. Raven sounded like some geek who just smoked a bowl of pot and wanted to just get the scene over with. Maybe improve on these things and you might have somthing. 5/10
EclipseNine responds:
i appreciate your feedback, and the first thing i did after i finished it was go out and get a good mic. Raven's voice, my friend who did the voice didn't like the way his voice sounded, so i had some fun with it, i made his voice annoying, i think the pitch and speed were increased by like 13%, anyway, i promise better voices on the next one.
