Eh, coulda been betta
Dude, no offense but that was bad, and wut is up with your posts, man, like the post "I know you want to rape my ninja" dude not even micheal jackson would rape him.
yeah i much agree with the last post
Could use polish, a lot of polish.
I haven't seen any of your other stuff, and I don't much feel like watching it now, so I don't know if you've improved since this or not, but keep workign at it. Needs work, but then again everyone needs to keep working on things. I'm not gunna rage about how much I hated it or anything like that, hey, I couldn't do much better myself. Just keep at it, I think it shows promise, good job.
i know u want to rape my ninja