ok

yeah i much agree with the last post

Could use polish, a lot of polish.

I haven't seen any of your other stuff, and I don't much feel like watching it now, so I don't know if you've improved since this or not, but keep workign at it. Needs work, but then again everyone needs to keep working on things. I'm not gunna rage about how much I hated it or anything like that, hey, I couldn't do much better myself. Just keep at it, I think it shows promise, good job.

Disgusting graphics

pfffffffff

disgusting graphics

pfffffffffff

haha

um the rain stoped and you could still hear it raining yeah i thought the whole movie was rather funny but oh well ..