Well??

yes looked good but it didnt look like Flash an just a note for ya instead of keepin the camera focused on the doldy the whole time tryhavin it look up at it ans soon as you come through the pass (like you have) but then go back to lookin round on the ground level till you get infront of it then pan right an slowly assend to your finish part which wasnt too clear if he fell or got hit by the astroid I'm asumin the latter so make the camera fuzz out with "snow" right as the astroid hits it then as it falls do it again when it hits the ground an maybe do a sideways shot of the ground asif it fell outta the guys hands

Yah.

OK, I can see what you're trying to do, but you need to make the camera movements smoother; the transition between the trucking movement and the crane movement was very jerky, and the frame rate was a bit inconsistant.

Also, this looks like you didn't use Flash or Swift, but Maya or 3DS Max or something. Not sure if this is the right place to post it.

You did this all wrong

I bet you just converted this to flash and submitted it. YOu should have imported it to save on fize size. There was real graphics or animation. This is just a video, it doesn't even have a point. If you want to submit stuff to this site please don't sumit video liek this all it does it eat bandwidth. SUre the Video looks nice and all, but this isn't true flash

What was that?

What was that!? Really? just a short video with no point whatsoever, and took an eternity to load. Dont submit such pointless crap!

Not really sure what to think.

Did you animate that in a different program, then just transfer it into flash?

Also, like the title implies, it's just a little intro thingy. Like you see before a movie to promote the groups who made it. SHoudln't really be posted as a complete movie. and 5 megs in size for 20 seconds of video? Come on...