1st time eh?

not bad for you first flash, keep it up, and by the way, it would really spice things up if you added voices instead of text. I'll definitely watch the next one.

oh no

Beware black gordon freeman...

For a first you have talent!

I like the style you chose with the mystery and the start. Amazing start, movie like. Ok now for the good old what could be better and how you could make it better. First it needs more color; at least in the close, you have color on the face but not the close, hmm. And wow that was the slowest bullet-time I have ever seen. This was pretty nice. I hope in the future dialog gets added and some more color. Also the animation needs just a little work, it seemed just a bit slugish. KEEP IT UP!

No fuckin way!

This cant be your first flash...its fuckin amazing, especially for your first time. This is a nice break from some of the crap that gets submitted to New Grounds. Great Job!! I cant wait for future episodes!

P.S: all my 5, and you deserve it

This just can't be your first

I've seen flashes that are the 15th one made by an artist and they aren't even half as good. you have some insane talent. I can only wait to see how much you improve. There's just no way this is your first. I mean, wow.