Needs more

Well since its your first its ok, but could use lots of work, remember it pays to take your time, and make every little detail possible, the little things matter, and it would be better in the outcome, but im glad to see your first movie make it, its all a learning exp from now

~X~

This entire flash is so rushed that it feels like a demo. You should take your time and create good graphics and try to make your animations smooth. I would suggest spending at least a week on your next submission.

lol

LOL its kinda stupid but it is most sertently fun

well...

i gave you a star because you know how to do flash...this was abhorrent. at least you could have made it hard...or something.

sukish game

worst game ever on newgrounds but for ur 2nd time its not bad