yea
great
but poor figures!
whaddup with the broen no nippled not so sexy chick?
still i sense more good in you!
keep it up
Author Comments
-===I am looking for voiceactors for the upcoming movies about the "black chick hero" the most important is a girl for the main character but i also need male voices===-=== Note: in the serie iwill put much more time on the graphics especially the blood & Gore effects. Iwill also have a story line inspired by TES3:Morrowind and the books of David Eddings, The tamuli books. The action scenes however will remain in the same style with stillpictures (improved though) and smaller moving graphics with good music===-
To revoice the previous comments...
Good job,
you have potential,
work on blood,
work on facial details,
and... Oh. That's all I have to say.
Make the series good!
the hell?!
This was interesting, but i gotta ask you: what did you do to her brests? I mean they looked just WRONG... Overall, not too good, not too bad
Ari0n responds:
Maybe ur right.. In my series later iwant her to be sexy (but still really hard) so maybe thats one thing i will want to improve. Send me an e-mail ;) Ari0n@amail.se
Needs to be longer
This is too short. The violence needs some work when the monsters was killed could be drawn better. The blood effects need to be better. If you could improve that It would be better.
Ari0n responds:
Many said like you do and i will also do so (try to improve my drawing skill(or at least give it some more time)
Needs Plot
Was that Lúthien, daugher of Thingol, wife of Beren, he who shares with her the most beautiful love of Tolkien's Silmarillion? And those beasts she slayed... were those actually wargs? Well, I don't think so. At least, it didn't really seem so, although some said so in their reviews... Well, I'll suppose this is an original concept from you.
Now, you see... this wasn't a bad movie at all, I kinda liked it. Really. But it was so fast that I couldn't enjoy it as I would like to. I think your lady Lúthien requieres some plot... I read in your comments that you might make of her the main character of some story. Well, I advice you to go on and do it! I think it would be way better. I mean... even awesome battle scenes are kinda empty, compared to a nicely written story. Oh yeah... nothing replaces an involving plot. So, I really hope you'll go on with Lúthien. And I'll be waiting a nice story! Good luck!
Ari0n responds:
Thank you, Thank you :) As you said this really needs a nice story many said my graphics is my weakness of course i will try alot to improve them but i really think i want to do this mainly a story thing movie and not just an regular action one.
And then i also think im better at writing then animating, im just waiting for the inspiration then i will start ;)
Like u said Luthien is a name already used in the Silmarillion but i didnt take it directly from that book, it was just in my head when i tried to come up with a name and woops i thought I made it up :)