It's ok...
5MB for that tiny thing??? Man... shorten it down, thats MUCH to much for that short thing.
Overall:
*** - Average
I haft to say this is my most plot driven cartoon yet. I think you'll like it. Sadly I had to edit it harshly to fit it into 5 megs so if you want to see the supirior version you can find it on my site.
It's ok...
5MB for that tiny thing??? Man... shorten it down, thats MUCH to much for that short thing.
Overall:
*** - Average
oh nice
a clay movie... it seemed cool at first but then it lagged my computer a little bit which is not cool at all. 5MB's is a little big for a short flash clay movie like this. A suggestion here would be to shorten the resolution of this flash movie and lower the quality of each image you import into flash. Voice acting also didn't seem all that great... "i'm definitely not an alien" wasn't the greatest line. So yea, a few improvements and this could be a great flash. you definitely know how to animate clay.
((( IT WAS OK )))
Well its notbad, but has been done a few times now, the clay was ok, but the size was really bad, its not always best to use 5 megs if thats whats availble, but notbad of the clay works...
~X~
(everyone wants to be -knox-)
b4 i saw it i wasike whoa!!!! cool!! robots!!!
than i saw it and im like whoa!!! claymation is old
it was well done but NO MORE CLAYMATION!
Actualy I don't want to be Knox although i like his animations, I used to make stop motion when I was 10-11 and just recently gained the capability to do it again. Also for your information this cartoon is not strictly a claymation, the robot is made almost entirely of wood, and the man's head is made of glue-gun glue that I painted. I appriciate your comments and will take them into consideration (perhaps I'll make a 2-d robot film just for you, later).
nice try
try again buddy.. u gettin there