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Haven Episode 1

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ive only been doing flash for 2 months This is my first episode its not all that great but the characters have been redrawn and they look a helluva lot better than in this episode

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Legendary Frog inspired... which is a good thing!

The graphics were pretty good, but you lost marks because you so blatantly ripped off Legendary Frog. It's exactly the same style. Still, you picked the right person to rip off, and your name is creative. Style bonus. Animation sucked though. Kinda funny, but cheesy. Sound was pretty weird. Still, it's 3-worthy, which is better than most. Good job!

My advice: do some more flash, but don't submit it. I didn't submit my first till I had been working for 2 years. That didn't do too well, but it's only because it was a school project done in 2 weeks. I'm working on a joint project, though, which will be far better. kthxbye!

famebyframe responds:

HOLY COW! I cant believe someone actually stumbled upon this,

its like 2 years old lol I'm a lot better than I was then, I just havent made anything worth submitting


seeing as how now I only work with frame by frame to actually give my name some sort of merit,

if your on DA leave me a comment on my page, the links in my profile

thanks again for your time ^^

MC's cheating

Lol! Cute. MC you bad man! Good for first attempt. My first is going to suck, and you know it! ^_^

w/e

sinde its you first one ill go soft on you but man work on you characters alot more and the sounds! instead of having stick lines around your character draw the outlining first with the paint brush! trust me it will look a hell of a lot better if you do that, overall for a first time it was ok i guess....

((( FUNNY )))

Haha this was entertaining and funny, and notbad art work, could use some more details in the characters and details, it was funny though, keep up the good work...

~X~

Not bad

for only two months experience, that was pretty dam good, u definatley have a future at newgrounds

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Dec 1, 2004
10:44 PM EST