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World record ep.1

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This is the first episode of World record ....
1.Some1 give me a really funny idea for the second episode
2. if you review it , plz , don't say : this was gay ! or thing like this ... just say what i need to add or change.
**special thanks to northstarx **

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Average

It was kind of funny. The kid goes for it and makes it, all the while making wise cracks.

Ok, that's not really what happened. He was saying things a little fast in succession, which made it only a little bit funny.

But it would have been funnier if eh would have been making wise cracks.

Also, your drawing skills don't own. Work on that, and I'm sure I will enjoy the next installation of this series.

:/ < nothing too great

The voices didn't match the captions the whole time much, but the point was proven: someone made a world record. Not too bad, but your animation and timing need more work.

Nice try.........

I think the next episode should be, the world record for getting laid in one day! That'd be funny!

Lot's of room for improvement.

What i liked: * you tried. which is more than can be said for a lot
of people who come to newgrounds and slag of the
material.
* It's got to the potential to be one of those mini
series that people look in on every now and then
a cheap laugh.

On the other hand. the sound sync was a bit off in places, the voice made you want to shoot your self just a little, the actual animation of the event was poor, i presume it was a bit of a tween job (nut if it was frame by frame then well done, that's not easy!) and should have been smoother and quicker. Finally, it wasn't funny, you need to be original if you're gonna stand out. So practice your animating and come up with original ideas, like the world record for most old ladies beaten to the floor with a fossilized aardvark in 36 hours for example.

go to it. for now i'm gonna have to score this with a one!

The-Protector responds:

THANKS for the good review ..

really helpfull

hmmmm..........

Well... that wasn't too good, but at least you finished the whole thing and spent some almost decent work on it. You get a C minus for effort. Although it really isn't enjoyable to watch.

The-Protector responds:

ok thx , the next will be 2x more funny

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