Lot's of room for improvement.
What i liked: * you tried. which is more than can be said for a lot
of people who come to newgrounds and slag of the
material.
* It's got to the potential to be one of those mini
series that people look in on every now and then
a cheap laugh.
On the other hand. the sound sync was a bit off in places, the voice made you want to shoot your self just a little, the actual animation of the event was poor, i presume it was a bit of a tween job (nut if it was frame by frame then well done, that's not easy!) and should have been smoother and quicker. Finally, it wasn't funny, you need to be original if you're gonna stand out. So practice your animating and come up with original ideas, like the world record for most old ladies beaten to the floor with a fossilized aardvark in 36 hours for example.
go to it. for now i'm gonna have to score this with a one!