Again, the main flaw was that it was too short. I'm thinking you could have just made the first two episodes into one. A four part series would be better. The voice acting seemed off in this. I think there might have been something wrong the mike(s). Then again, I'm no expert at this stuff myself.

The voices ARE pretty authentic. It's weird to hear about something abridged before "Yu-Gi-Oh: The Abridged Series". It also could have had more jokes. At least the names are creative. It just isn't for me.

Interesting.......... We find out where they have

landed. They also found a mansion on Mars as I see it. Who lives in that mansion anyway? Maybe it's Brak, or Moltar, or even the Council of Doom, or even worst, the evil Mantis of the Apocolipse, ZORAK!!!!!!!!!!! "GONNA GETTA" AHH!!!!!! Haha I was kidding with you. The sound this time is much better than the last episode. I can hear what they are saying now! I like that Xylus does that Space Ghost impression in this episode! I also like that the kid, Dexter, gets his book out and can't even make a decision on who lives in that mansion. You know, come to think of it, this show reminds me of Space Ghost alittle. Well, I'll be seeing you in the next episode my friend. May God speed with you my ally ( meaning friend).

"Hey Zorak, You evil locust." - Weird Al Yancavitch
"Mantus!" - Zorak
Peace out! - JojoMon

Yay. 1 year old tdday.

1 year old today, and it still holds the great-ness of a recent Flash. Even if this was submitted today, it would get a Daily award.. and it was Dail 3rd back then. Whoa; must of had high-expectations back then.

Anyway I love your style; real nice. Keep submitting, even today. Please <3

8.5

As with the previous installment of the series, you bring top of the line graphics, voices, sound effects, and humor to this series of two very interesting characters. The episodes fly by so quickly, even though they are 2 minutes in length - The 8 episodes will fly by! The designs of the characters are great, a unique slender type of superheroes who are presumably children with nice movements. Their voices seem professional, but are probably your children, right? A little more action in this episode, with Xylus and Dexter finally landing on Mars. This really has me intrigued as to what could possibly be on the strange, red planet.

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it was short

and kinda boring