Nice idea, but really needs some work.

Judging by the date of this movie, it seems that you're not working on this series anymore, but I figured I'd leave some comments just in case. The movie has a good premise to it, and I really love the sound use, but everything else just falls flat of success. The visuals are just lousy, to be honest. The characters look fine, it's just the way that they move and how everything around them is placed that just ruins it. Tons of 'white-space' and a lot of jaggy edges that put a damper on an otherwise fine look. Also, give *some* idea as to what exactly is going on. The story left me confused most of the movie, and judging by the other reviews, I wasn't the only one. Lastly, get a preloader. Make your own, or use one of the fifty billion that Newgrounds has on their site. Compress the sound a tad bit, as well. It personally doesn't bother me because I have DSL, but I bet some 56kers want the best use of their precious time as much as possible. Anyways, real unique movie, but if there's any more to it, you'd better take some of the suggestions into hand if you want an audience for this series.

B-

Hmm its pretty good, the story, but animation and graphics could use a little work.

((( OK )))

Could use some work to ot, ad some depth into the story and try and bring that file size down somewhat and more people might watch it, but for the most part it was interesting, effects could increase in the score aswell, nice flash though...

~X~

good

Great animations! Its just that you had no "story" behind it all, you had a good length, if only it had more to it. It just made it too short. But make more in the series that are longer, with more then one character in it. GOOD JOB

that was really good..

the cartoon it self was ok, bt it was far to short! i htink the creds were longer. bt i can see u have tryed. the simpsons style drawings were ok, and i like the faxct that u left us with a to be continued, and i do kinda wanna see more! bt make it agen - but add how the blood got there, then the guy walks in blah blah ya know? bt keep it up i like your efort! so i gave u a 5.