Notbad could use more effort

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad i thought the side winding like characters could be more life like but it was entertaining, keep up the good work though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the characters walk sideways so it looks like they are really walking and such

~~OVERALL~~
Good but needs more

~X~

Not the greatest

First thing that i noticed is that you havent decided to make a second submission to this which is a shame considering the way you left this one. I thought the main problem with your flash was the timing, i mean you took so long for characters to move from one side of the screen to the other which made it boderline unwatchable at points. The good part of this was the voice acting which was great and adding the subtitles helped a lot with the gangsta slang the characters were using.

Heh, it was okay.

Well this submission was an okay submission. I thought it had some interesting parts to it, but it really didn't give much in the way of a story. I mean we saw what happened, but we never saw why it happened or what the motive really was. The graphics were okay, but the animation itself moved far too slowly for my taste. Average submission for its time.

ehhh

kind of down the middle here, I can tel you put a lot of though and effort into the story, and the drawings weren't bad, but the animation was lazy in terms of movement, good job having both voices and text, but you don't really need text to much when voices are present. And I have to say that even though there was a story, the plot was pretty thin.

Not bad, but not good either

Good Stuff:

The music went along with it good, and it was kinda funny somehow.

Bad stuff:

It was kinda boring the fact that the speech of the characters was text instead of audio, and it also wasn't that stylish. Try harder.

Peace.