ehehe...

well...ummm....it was a really nice cartoon in the fact that it was a weirdo robot doo-hickey that looked cool lol. i wont burn you for the lack of skill in flash, i dont know how familiar you are with it. try again and improve this! hakuna matata! lol

hmmmm

ok u have put efort in to this wich is a good thing. it wasznt that bad realy dull n dark - i dunno if you were trying to make it like that but if u wernt u'll say you were now.
keep up the good wrk tho, but try loosen up the loading time. it'd been the music, so lower its kb size!
:P

Cool

That was pretty cool but it was a rather short movie for such long loading. Try to make the music less kb. then the movie will be smaller and we dont have to wait that long. But you need to contineu making Flash :)

((( NEEDS WORK )))

That was cool but needs work, one most important thing i can say to you is lower the file size for the 56k users and there are hundreds of us, the art was ok but needs better presentation, nice work though, good luck in the future...

~X~

A tad short, but not bad.

You've got skills in the art department, I'll give you that. Your choice of musical tracks was also a good one. Though I have to say this submission is quite short, I mean I was just getting into it and then it said "To Be Continued". So if I had to offer some ideas for improvements, I'd say you should include more of an explanation as to what's happening. You may also want to include sound effects. All in all, it wasn't a bad submission.