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its my first flash, i hope u like it

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ok

not bad for a first flash movie.

Not TOO bad

Apart from the whole "there is no plot" thing, it was OK.
But it could use better music and some sound effects.
And maybe a little improvement in the graphics department.
And try not to misspell "continued" next time.

prety good

that is extreamly good fopr a first flash

good but needs more plot and legnth

i thought that it could have been better if u tried letting people now a little about ur character .maybe like who he is or what his powers are. i guess it was an okay teaser but try to work in some more story on the next one

Needs Work!!

well good for the first time. But honestly you could have put voices and some story line into it. Just redo the flash and re-submit it. no need for a series?

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2,962
Votes
27
Score
3.49 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 15, 2004
9:51 AM EST