Excellent!

__The Good__
This is a really great flash. You had pretty good graphics and backgrounds. A great story line but it seems people use this a lot. Great music as well. It fit perfectly into this flash! This flash probably has the best voice acting I have heard on Newgrounds in a very long time.

__The Bad__
The mouth movement was way off. Now I don't know if this is just my computer but this was really laggy when I looked at it. The audio kept going on but the movie just stayed in one frame for the longest time. Sorry if this is just my computer's fault but I needed to point that out.

__Improvement__
You should fix the mouth movement. I don't know why but I just can't take this flash as seriously as I want to with the mouths are all off key. You might want to shapen up your graphics as well. They were good but at some points the characters just didn;t look right.

__Over All__
Over all this is a really good flash. I really enjoyed watching it. Had a fast pace to it and the voice acting really blew me away. Great job makeing this flash, I can't wait to see the next one! Just shapen up those graphics a bit. Once again good job on makeing this. Keep up the good work!

Patience is a virtue!

I had a hard time finishing this story..

Most original thing I've seen on this site

Wasn't funny, wasn't very action filled yet somehow it was still entertaining
:-D Good Job

Pretty good.

It was pretty good. The sound was a bit messy when he was yelling at his father. And the graphics weren't the best. But it was high potention for being good. This one was pretty good. I just didn't understand why he started screaming at the end. Nice work, and keep it up!

DITTO!

I loved it. I really got into it, in the end I was so pulled in! I want to see whats coming up next!!!