funny

nice job

Cool.

Good flash.. I enjoyed it, i just found the talking went to fast

Keep it up =)

good first

well the music cutting out last scene wasnt that good, but the whole entire flash was pretty good

Dialogue

If this is your first attempt at flash then well done. i can see that if you carry on you may do very well. This flash is not bad for a first attempt but you need to practice on dialogue, and DUDE slow down the text!!!

graphics were ok...

the scripting was horrible, i think u need to find someone else to write the dialogues for u, cuz they were very good. the animations werent too bad tho, maybe want to slow down the dialogue boxes too, but i see potential, good luck with future flashes