Needs subtitles
I think this flash needs subtitles or something cause I could hardly understand what the narrorator and the rat is saying. Overall-Good Work
Author Comments
ok, this hasn't got the greatest script in the world (thats why im looking for a script writer) but it was something i could do, humour that is funny in everyday life isnt always funny in anims, remember that kids! (i had to sacrifice sound quality for small file size, otherwise it would have been 6mb)
This flash is crunk fo shizzle
Hey , i like it , small horse hes the coolest . Good look with more dead rats, and maybe a better script!
meh
short, but it was alright i guess.
Definitely needs a script
You're right about real life stuff vs. anim stuff, just gotta get more creative I guess. Use ideas from TV and other Flash. (don't plaigerise but get inspiration). Nice animation, though it looks a little like it's under water (best way I can think to describe it) improve physics a bit more? Keep at it.
good
but not great. the script did kinda suck but the anim made uo for that and it was fairly good and vaguely watchable, which is better than most of the stuff here.
keep working at it and you'll have a hit sooner or later=>
darx1 responds:
thankyou :) im going to start a new one soon, scrap all that i got atm since they also have bad scripts and try really hard to make something funny :)
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- Oct 27, 2004
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