ok
needs a better ending
Author Comments
Sorry it took so long to get up...newgrounds wouldnt let me on for the longest time... oh well here it is. DONT WATCH IF YOU HATE STICK MOVIES!! and im kinda done with IG for now, kinda bored with it, maybe i'll finish episode 3 later....
Nice for a stick movie.
It was an overall good movie, with the advantages of smooth simple graphics, some 3D, and music, though I must say the music wasn’t a good idea, it kept playing when the yellow guy died as well as after the movie ends, I’d suggest you fix that, it just doesn’t make it look good. It was well animated and drawn, and beside the music I have no real complaints. Keep up the good work.
Stats:
Graphics: 7, it was decently animated and drawn, I may not be a big fan of sticks, but this movie was ok with them. Not bad graphics overall.
Style: 5, Sort of an action movie I suppose, not bad but the music didn’t match the style you tried to give to the movie, improve that.
Sound: 6, Effects were decent but the music had its problems. It played when the guy dies which is just plain wrong, and it plays after the movie ends, fix that.
Violence: 7, Some amount of fighting, nothing too bloody, it’s just sticks after all. Some more blood would help the movie a great deal more.
Interactivity: 4, It had a play button and a website link, more than most movies have, good. Try adding scene select, seek, quality controls, and sound controls.
Humor: 3,Nothing really humorous here so…
Overall: 6,Above average work, very nice movie overall, keep up the good work.
Very Lazy
This could've been frontpage material if you didn't fuck it up with stick figures, and i know you have the potential to create better art because you showed it to us just with your logo of phoenix studios or w/e and the title page also exhibited good art, So you were just lazy and took it to stick figures like the usual lazyass would- Next time don't be usual, put pride into your work and try your best
Wow
That was pretty darn good!
((( COOL )))
This was a cool idea its an all around welldone flash with some cool effects but could use some more details, details always make a flash better, it starts out reallt cool and kind of lowers in detail, but overall it was cool and interesting, hope to see more soon...
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