It got better
Now u need to make it more longer
Author Comments
this is the third episode of my series. i have added backgrounds to the chat text so you can read it easily now. enjoy the flash
ok cool
~~REVIEW~~
These do get better with age, cant wait to see marle, the size on these are really good too, nice job overall
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more effects
~~OVERALL~~
Another good sprite flash
~X~
nice
Very good still havent seen the sexy Marle but im still watching the series to see the hottie. Good job .
A few things
The Good:
1.) Text boxes were a great idea.
2.) Storyline is looking great
The not-so-good:
1.) Wish Crono would have done something better than teleport (which I've never heard of him doing) and slashing through all of them at once. Not bad mouthing your animations capabilities, but I think you could have done something better with that.
2.) Your Old English needs work ;P
all 10s cuz its this flashes b'day
yeah