I have to admit, my eyes were watering a bit at the end. The switch between drawing styles was very effective in showing Jeremy's thoughts vs the real world. Also, I don't think it would have felt the same if you hadn't had added the period in the title. ;)
The only reason I took off that .5 was because of the scream at the end. Wasn't needed, and like most other people said, kinda ruined the mood. Other than that, great little animation with tons of emotion!