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Sword of Wolves

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So here it is my very first flash here on newgrounds, everyone flame a way. i worked on this on and for about 3 weeks, when i say on and off i mean like 1 day a week every week for maybe 4 hours a week. Anyway its just a little story about a guy trying to get a sword and the guardian of the sword stomping the crap out of him. ya thats all.

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nice!

very good. Use better records on sounds. An original story, and I can see that you worked on this submisson for a long time. So its great for a first flash. Rewiew:

Graphics : 6. Nice but work on your drawings.

Style : 9. Very original.

Sound : 8. Nice but work on the record thing.

Violence : 7. That sword stuff was imprresing.

Interactivity : 4. Its not a long movie so you right about this.

Humor : 2. I dont have any reasons.

Overall : Good, work on it to make it better.

ps. im waiting for the next one. :D

Sweet Flash.

The characters may be made of paper but this thing is way cool. I can't wait till the next part if there is one.

noice!

For a first that was pretty damn good, although a have to say the mouths moving part kinda sucked, but the aimation and fighitng was pretty noice. Da end

hmmmm...

..well that was gay, cool name tho

You need practice.

All in all it wasnt bad, but not that good either. i understand that this was your first try and everyone had to start somewhere. You need to practice with the animation. The sound was ok while it was quite clear the voices seemed quite unmotivated. It'll take a little time but i do think you can go somewhere.

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4,576
Votes
29
Score
3.10 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 14, 2004
1:26 AM EDT