Very good start too a series

It was a good movie overall but I think you should make this a series... I'm not sure if thats what you have in mined but i think its a good idea... I would also practice you animating skills alittle too... over all good movie... keep it up.

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This seems to be a good start for a good series.

I liked it, the drawings were pretty good but the animation left a little to be desired. Your general concept seemed to be sound. And the musical choice wasn't bad. This is one animation that will fully bloom once more episodes have been completed. It is most deffinitly a good start for a series though, i really hope you continue along with it and add more chapters. Have i said that enough? maybe one more time?! ok! continue with episodes! Ok, ::phew:: i think thats been said enough times now.

Goodjob! This should turn out great once your skill improves some more.

interesting

well done

Good plot

Well the everything was pretty decent, but I liked the story, it's different from other's. I'm looking forward to the rest of this story.

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i didnt understand what was happening, so maybe ur making another one
but almost four meg for that download time? try compressing the sound