Aww, why was it so short? I felt like you could have done so much more with this. I still appreciated how creative it was. I don't recall seeing a Lock like this. The music was nice too. The colors were pretty vibrant as well.
The pacing wasn't bad. It just felt like it should have built up to something more. I don't think anything was eaten. Why did you credit yourself twice? You even have the same description.