hmm a bit too dark

But im' at least the first guy to review in 6 years beat that 111zebo111

Hmmm...

Im the first person to review in 4 YEARS!!! I would like to thank myself.

Not Bad

I saw this flash before when whoever submited it the first time and I did review it so I thought I would watch it agian maybe to see if there was like something different in it.

Graphics: The graphics are really strange in this flash. You use the whole red theme which is interesting but I dont think it was the best choice for the flash and just the whole theme you were going for. You did do an alright job with like different camera views.

Sound: Sound was alright but you seriously need to add voice acting if you want this series to be successful its just an necesity.

OVerall: Not Bad 7

Hmmmmmm......can't make up my mind

Because you use sooo much red in this animation it gets very confusing to see wats going on in some scenes...I think u really need to work on ur animating skills. Some of ur drawing are really good eg. the car but when u've tryed to hav gun fight or something it just looks gay..Nice try.. Just try to mle ur next flash more interesting and DON'T introduce ur characters twice... liked ur music

Potential Great on the way

I really love how you used the red and black tones to set a mood for the whole theme as well as a good choice of music for each chapter in this short very well done. You are also very good at capturing the perspective of the scenes really well the only thing that I see needing improvement, which I am sure that many have told you, is graphics ... get yourself some good graphics going and you will be one of the great flash animators. You got the story, sound, plot, and action all lined up and heck even some good intrigue and the red and black tones is a great style only thing missing is the graphics. So even though I've made my 5 votes for the day I'm voting a 4 on you anyways just cause I would love to see you keep working hard and can't wait to see how you improve.