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Opperation CresentMoon

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Hello, this is my first flash, I got the free version of flash 5 days ago, and I looked at some tutorials and started making some cartoons. This one took me about 6 hours in all and before I started this one I could barely tween. So, reviews are appriciated, and suggestions as well. Thanks NG for the preloader

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Amazing!

Even for expierienced flashers, this puts them in their place. It is quite obvious of the natural talent.

Keep up the marvelou work! :D

You got my 5.

Good work for 6 hours!

That was brilliant considering it was made in 6 hours. I hope you keep animating. P.S. how do you get the free version of flash?

Two Words...

Fcking Awesome... finally someone puts that bastard in his place, oh and great work man.. Keep It Up ;)

Ooozes with quality.

Nice graphics!

EXCELLENT

You sir are overwhelming with natural flash talent. This was amazing for a first movie!(most are crap, including my very first)

Animation: Nicley animated, I especially liked the traveling bullet and explosion effects.

Graphics: You can obviously draw well and you seem to have a good grasp on perspective drawings and backgrounds. This is a great skill that many artists lack these days. VERY GOOD USE OF GRADIENT EFFECTS! :D

Sound: Very good use of high quality sound effects. Next time though, try and stream your sound or further compress event sound effects.

Interactivity: Thank you for using the NG preloader ;).

Style: Heh.. that would be an interesting mission... kill the dough boy! Very nice. Good title too ;).

Violence: I liked how after the dough boy got hit, he was pushed into the oven. The explosion was a nice closer.

Humor: Heh.. at first I looked at this and thought it would be a serious war movie, but it ended up giving me a good laugh. The GI JOE thing was great... lol.

Overall: A great first movie! Just work on the filesize and keep practicing. You will become a great flash animator.

-TT

Shifty55 responds:

Thanks for the great review! My next one is gonna be epic ill probably spend a good 1/4th year on it, lol if i can find a way to keep flash.

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