cool, but short
it was a pretty cool animation, nice idea to it... but it was way too short. i think that this animation could've done a lot better if it was longer... but overall, it was still good to watch and you put a good effort into it.
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UPDATE 7/15/05: Optimized the Audio.
UPDATE 6/7/05: OH NOES! JAL JAS A FORUM!
http://jeffandlee.ezforu
m.org/
UPDATE 9/21/04: The Animation has been improved, the voice quailty has been boosted, Jeff's shirt on the right way, and I look a bit more feminin-ish. [Yah, I'm a girl :/]
Ok. Jeff made some .flas of us in human form, so I decided to play around with them. That morning I was eating Lucky Charms at the time I saw them.
This is what became of it.
Keep in mind that this is only my 4th flash, and I put some effort into it. It's not as good as Legendary Frog, and I wanted to improve voice quailty, but I didn't know how so I just gave up on that and whipped up this. I may turn this into a series, if I feel so inclined.
NOW WATCH...
AND LEARN.
Kyora-Mishiso responds:
Thanks.
Way to short
Well I did like what was there but there was not a lot of it. The graphics were nice and simple but the blood effect could have been improved a lot. There is not a lot I can add to the review, as it is so short.
Kyora-Mishiso responds:
Aye.
Thankies.
I'm really glad you're talking the time to watch all my movies.
<3
A disappointing start.
This is definitely a disappointing first part of this many part series of JAL movies. There really wasn't a solid storyline involved in this except that leah wants her lucky charms back. The movie is very short and could have used a lot more substance to it. Drawings and character designs however were good, except for the blood which looked really stupid. This is a little disappointing, but I will watch the rest of the series.
Kyora-Mishiso responds:
Yah, it was my first one.
With peoples.
Jeff made the people. And I know it could have, and I know the blood sucked. Buuut...
The whole series is REALLY about Random Violence.
WTF?
alright im dont liek this flash for 2 reasons.
1. only 13 seconds long
2.sucky backgrounds and blood
Kyora-Mishiso responds:
I admit, the movie is quite suckeh.
But it's one 'o me first.
Until then, RAWR.
Wait-- This was a movie!?
The people were relatively well-drawn, but everything else was 2-dimensional and square. There was absolutely no plot and absolutely no humor involved in any of this. You would've been better off using MSPaint's airbrush than what you used to animate the blood. The voices were crappy, they were barely audible and unless I'm mistaking Jeff is a male name and should be given a male voice.
Kyora-Mishiso responds:
We are having problems with the recording of the voices. Nightmare Clock, the person who plays Jeff's voice, has-
Actually, it's none of my business to say. However, I have to say that this was one of the most constructive flames I have ever recieved.