ehm
ehm, if you make a full version include a background like a city or something, amd make the platforms the ppl stand on into rooftops and stuff, its annoying caus anything i submit like that gets blammed imediatelly
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Here's a small teaser of whats coming, so far 10 hours work, 600 frames done one by one, loads of planning for the futur.
The appearance of a cow is planned.
Support this movie.
Sincerely yours,
Bobly.
I respect you, so respect me and my work.
Bobly responds:
Well I spent time on animation, its smooth, and they can see the skill behind the lack of motivation =D
I'll take in count your review and varie my backgrounds (basically re-do the whole thing :)) WHEN I have time (school really hit me hard this september).
Catch ya later.
Sincerely yours,
Bobly
looking forward to the movie
I'm still going to vote low because its a preview. but it still looks sick. oh yea the music was annoying. 6/10
Bobly responds:
Okay well I'm working hard on it, and the music is supposed to be kinda misterious, adding the effect of mystery on the final version =D
looks good
I gave sound a zero because it got annoying. Other than that this looks like its going to be a good flash.
Bobly responds:
Ya well i just added sound coz its better than nothing, and it makes the theme of mystery come out a lil more...
needs work.
you can animate quite well, but that's not the issue. first of all, get a background, just put in some colour, or something... nobody likes to look at a white screen.
second, try to get things a bit bigger, i dunno, increase the screen size. the characters and objects were too small.
put a story line in - people are now sick of seeing a bunch of sticks killing each other in a room in one scene, its way old.
so keep working at it, it could turn out very good.
overall score: 4/10
(THE THUMB: slightly down)
Bobly responds:
Okay, well you reviewed very well (like all your reviews by the way, you seem to be on my case =D)
The animation is what I'm basing my hopes on, it takes ages to do but it's frame by frame work, now what I submitted was just the intro, the bit which starts just after what you just say will be a race to survive.
The background will scroll left and sticks have to race right to not get squashed between the side and the walls, and because three of the characters are friends IRL, I gave them the right to invoke something to help them, so you'll probably see a cow, a chicken, and the last hasn't decided yet =D
The screen size is currently small, I might make it slightly bigger, not much for the simple reason I don't want to re-animate it =D
Sincerely yours,
Bobly
hmm, ok
it looks good so far, even though it is stick. i wonder what will happen... anyways, good job so far and keep on working. oh, could you tell me where you found that sound clip and what it is from in the background from please at lispylizzard@gmail .com? it sounds familiar, but i cant quite put my finger on what. well anyways, keep up the good work and i cant wait for the final product.
Bobly responds:
Well the music is... well I cant remember which but on www.flashkit.com in the loops part, you can do a search, the author is CALPOMAT, you'll have to ask him what inspired him =D
If thats not enough tell me by e-mail bobly_bobly_bobly@hotmail.com