you have been too good!!!
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Smoke wakes up and tries to find out who he is. Part 1 of the series. Feedback is welcome. Enjoy. (My other handle is HorrificMonster.)
Hey, it finally stayed on Newgrounds! I'm going to work on voices and maybe some different music, then I'll continue with the series. Thanks for keeping me!
Epic stuff good work
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^^Good Points^^
This was a good start to a series, it's a shame you didn't continue it. The storyline was pretty intriguing and it was cool how interactive you made this. I really liked how you gave info about Skel-corp with that computer terminal, and you added a lot of background info into the language, and made it seem like normal discussion. Great music too.
^^Needs Improving^^
Try not putting too much of text in blocks. It just discourages people from reading it, and it is hard to read when you make the text smaller. Should have just made it more than one box. Wish you would have continued this series :(
hi
good stuff
pretty sick!
I liked it not to bad. I like it that you get to choose when your finished reading other flash may go to fast. 3/5
TerrificMonster responds:
Thank you. I figured people wouldn't want to sit through all that reading, alot of it isn't necessary anyways. It's just to give you a little background information.
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