but it could use some work.
because there are no voices/so speach, i think that you need to use more sound effects to counter that, or put more music in.
also, i think that you could take a bit more care when drawing the characters, as sometimes they look like they could use some more detail.
other than that, the movie so far doesnt look bad, i just hope that there is more action soon.
overall score: 6/10
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