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Of What is Now: Tanari

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This is my first complete flash. I spent the better part of two months making this. It's the first in a series. I hope you enjoy it. There may be a problem with the load screen, or the veiw. If there is, I vow to fix it.


Update- Thanks a bunch to those of you who give me constructive criticism, it's helpful. Those of you with only idiot things to say, just keep your mouth shut.

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Hi haley it is Dafid(from lakewood)

Well i finally got off my lazy ass and watched this crap. You know how much i hate anime, but i beared the burden of 1-2 minitues of anime. It was kinda cool. I hate the first guy. He changes his expression too much. He looks like he was stoned just like sniffy pro in mrs. cheeses class !!!!(lol mrs. chesse is so out of reality it ceases to be funny anymore.) Any way the demon was kinda cool. The fireball was lame, needed to be larger. I really liked the sound, good music. and i went ot your gallery site thing, it was kinda cool(WTF is a WIZARDMON!!!!!!!!). Any ways peace up! (make sure you do your math so that i can copy off of it on tuesday.)
VAPORGunAZNDafid(get it like in ruins or whatever!!!(that was lame!))

ok

it was alright.

awesomness.

a really well-made movie.
the beginning was very good, as it showed some really good graphics and great animation of that characters facial movements.
also, the movie got to the good bits very fast. it wasnt slow paced at all, very good action.
the graphics were excellent - all characters were very well drawn, especially the monster... he looked sick.
the animation was excellent - all of the movements were very fluent, and overall just very good animation.
the sound was good - the choice of music was great, it went very well with the movie. so nice choice of music.
overall, a very good movie to watch. although it was short, and didn't seem to have much of a story behind it, it was entertaining. so good stuff, nice work.
overall score: 7/10
(THE THUMB: UP!!)

Great start

This is really good for a start. The preloader is a definite must and I never saw the play screen, had to push play on the flash menu. Also about half way through the screen moves to the bottom right corner? Your style is good though and so is the art. You did a good job bringing the elf thing to life in the first part, but the animation was a little jerky. And also the white flashing might have been a tad overdone. Overall it is a great start, nice and original. Cant wait to see more.

Good for first

The biggest thing to improve is to do more, I guess. Also, you should try doing some things FBF, It's the only way to go in some situations and is neccesary for certain things, like explosions.
Good Job

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Sep 12, 2004
5:24 PM EDT