Okay...
Uhuh, that wouldve been a million times better if it had some better animation and voice acting, the storyline was okay...just work on the other two.
Author Comments
This is the colored version of a submission I sent in to _Luis_ for Time Trial XIV. I thought it'd be fun to show off what it could have looked like in color instead of the required black and white. Enjoy and leave a review!
...what in the heck???
...that...was... really... what the hell???
What was that???
What are you thinking???
What the fuck?
If you want to see quality, see my cartoons...I spent many years perfecting my style and you just show up with your Goku Angel.
I hope you orgy out your stoop.
Not too good.
The story-line was bril, loved it... Your weakness lies in your animation skills. You need more... Movement...
ive seen better...lots better
the story line wasnt bad, but the animation sucked, there was no voice overs & the drawings looked like a 7 year old did them