That was fine. Despite this is the last thing you've done in a long time.
The graphics were good but the problem is that this story, has, been done to death and back and to death again.
Your other films are fantastic, your true eye for story telling is in drama. Your skills as an artist are fine, though many would say they are lacking. I say that you are good enogh(and I do like the rectangular eyes and paint drawings). Though I gave this piece a 7 out of 10, you as an artist you recieve a 10 out of 10.