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good artwork

I got what it was supposed to illustrate about halfway through. nice job with the layers.


Wow, I am in awe at the way you did that drawover thing, and how parts were built on layer by layer. That was an awesome work. I can't wait to see more of your stuff.

Growing effect = 1337

I love that effect, and the way you used it. Ambient techno is one of my personal soft spots, so that got some extra points as well. Throw in a love for all things mecha-ish, and you've scored a veritable home run.

Can't wait to see the series that puts Rhoær to use. Should be a chart-topper.


Come home :(
And make the ngdrunks flash bro ;)
But ya, the music really went well witht he flash. twas funky shit. original too. <3<3

not too bad...

except it just seemed like when the arms/legs were coming together, it just seemed as though there were quite thin, and didnt seem to fit the picture that is showed at the end (before he folds up). also, i dont really remember watching the torso appear... was it in there? meh.
so yeh, it just looked as if the whole character had not been drawn.
other than that, the graphics were really good.
all of the moving lines were a great effect, and Rhoaer looked sick at the end.
animation was also really good. as i said before, the moving lines = great. and the characters transformation also looked pretty cool.
so overall, nice work dude. cool looking character/transformer dude.
overall score: 6/10

altr responds:

Ya, all the parts were in there. Torso was at the end. Some of the stuff that was "forming" wasn't in the final "look", btw.

I can see how it might be a bit confusing, as some of the smaller/skinnier parts were zoomed in upon.
Thanks for the review =) ...

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3.88 / 5.00

Aug 30, 2004
6:12 PM EDT
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