This is my first submission to newgrounds. The zoloft dude gets poisoned by taking zoloft. So he goes to hunt down the creator. I am sorry its soo short but i drew it frame by frame. Please review and tell me what i can fix. If you like it you can put me as a favorite author it will help me out, or you can put it as a favorite submission.
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Well notbad, its cool for your first and while it does need some touch ups it was a cool idea and worked well from start to finish, a few details here and there along with some backround effects would make it much imroved, aswell as smaller filesize...
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Pretty good.
that was alot better than that salad fingers knock off. this one gave me a few laughs actually. good for a first one too. i like how he kills himself. idiot...
Hahaha
Nice. Pretty funny, although I have no idea why he shot himself with with bazooka and not the doctor...is he really that stupid? Either way, nice movie. Overall, it was pretty good though, considering your skill level. You definately seem like a beginner, but it wasn't too bad. You had some problems with it though. Some of the pictures were badly drawn, I couldn't even tell what they were. Maybe you should try coloring some stuff and shadowing. The other thing was that at the beginning the characters motion seemed odd. I mean, they were moving and all, but it just seemed strange, as if they were lurching. Other than that, great music! Keep up the good work, you'll get better :P
CRAP!!!!
heres a list of why I rated the way I did
for graphics I gave you a two. cause you made 2 eyeballs move.
for style i gave you a 0 because the circle was crap
sound ten because of bacground music.
Violence 10 because you know the color of blood. GOOD JOB!
interactivity 10 because when you cut a person blood come out
humor10 cause it sucked so bad.
overall 2-because a toddler could make that.
Ohh yea well your stupid. What do you say to that??? lol jk dont be an ass. Dont bother to write a review about how bad it is. Some people get sad and hurt themselves so be a good little boy and go play hide and go fuck yourself
Ah, what an interesting use of the Zoley character
There's been such a range of Zoloft flashes here on NG. Most are enjoyable in some form or another. And this is no exception!
The initial scene of Zoley sitting there in darkness with a crack of light above him... was quite well done. And... Zoley's weird sleep-deprived and squinty eyes that can't seem to blink at the same time... are disturbing as fuck. Much more disturbing than how he takes apart those two other... um... zolies with his knife... and then the cop... and then the gun store guy... and then himself.
I liked the "doctor who invented Zoloft" thing. Funny as hell.
I thought the music was suitably insane and depicted Zoley's mental state just fine. The only thing I must take issue with is... why do you assume those creatures are mice? I think they're supposed to be proprietary creations of Zoloft. #;-}>
I was going to name it the zoloft puff ball but that sounded gay as hell. So I thought that a mouse sounded like a nice innocent creature that would never harm a thing. E-mail me what you think I should change it to because I think it sounds kinda gay.