God, that's awful animation
Wow. I really don't like this, but I like madness, but the animation suck badly, but nice try anyway.
tell me how it looks....
God, that's awful animation
Wow. I really don't like this, but I like madness, but the animation suck badly, but nice try anyway.
ok...
get a 3+ for background
4+ for nice looking guys
1+ for no reson
Long Rant. Read it all. Try harder. NOT ABUSIVE!
Whoa. Here goes. RANT!
Graphics - 4 - The graphics mostly looked okay. The few things you did make yourself (ie. background) were a little under average, though I could tell what they were at least. However, most of were taken from the Madness Interactive source as creeef23 stated, and you must give credit for that or you are claiming it as your own, aka stealing them. That aside, at least they are in pretty good proportion. I mean, I've seen some madness tributes using the MI source, but the heads are bigger then their bodies or something like that. Other times people make the body so skinny it looks retarded. However, this is theft you must give credit. I'll cough you up a 4 on this one though.
Style - 0 - Before you get all pissed off that I zero'd you and mark this abusive, let me explain why first. This animation is very choppy and looks like a 12 fps first flash. Maybe it is. Maybe it's not. But even that aside, not only is the animation poor but... It's just not right... The walking is all wrong. Try walking. You don't just move to the side with your feet slightly moving. Your whole body goes up and down. It just looks all wrong. The FBF stuff at the start is not good. And it isn't madness either. The main problem is that this is WAY too short. Not that I really want to see more of this though. Anyways, I don't want to use up all my characters remaining on style, let me move on to...
Sound - 2 - Okay. This is kickass music. Madness Combat 3. However, again you did not give credit, so once again you are claiming this music as your own and stealing it. Not cool. Plus, the music double-tracks if you keep watching and gets really annoying because of lack of replay/play button. Didn't you notice this when you were testing this? Shouldn't you of asked for help from somebody to stop it? You've got it all wrong, sir, a flash movie isn't a 1-day production for fun. No, no ,no. Please actually watch your own movie through twice and fix stupid problems like this.
Violence - 1 - Madness needs violence. This is pitiful. 2 people die? That's not madness! That's just... stupid. You need to make your movie much longer and featuring far more kills. Plus the first character is beat to death, but then the other guy gets a sharp medallion in his face, but he's fine and wipes the blood off his face, even though being punch in the face twice can kill you. And creative how he gets the gun. Some dude gives it to him. HOW CREATIVE! Can't you make him kill somebody for it, eh?
Interactivity - 0 - What do you expect? No preloader even. No surprise here. You've got it wrong. Please put more effort into details like this.
Humor - 0 - Uh... I didn't find this funny, I was closer to crying then laughing, I don't think anything was supposed to be funny, was it?
I saw your response to creeef23 and I'm going to call out some stuff on that. I'm not trying to offend you, I'm trying to inform you.
:YOUR RESPONSE:
well... for one, when did I claim the artwork as my own? and another, there was absolutly nothing in this movie because the Symbols got messed up and I was just like "meh... whatever, I wanna see how quick this gets removed" and it never did ahaha. Thanks for the EXTREMLY constructive critism though :) rofl
:THAT'S ALL:
Where did you claim the artwork as your own. Hmm. A madness tribute BY ME. If there are no credits you are saying this is all BY YOU. Claiming as your own is stealing, and I honestly do think you're unaware of this. I demand you to credit krinkels for these graphics just in your movie description, and the same for the music. Credit cheshyre for the music.
You were just like "meh whatever how fast this will get deleted" That's the wrong attitude. Put effort into your flash, and if you don't think it's good, don't submit it. Effort. You could have some good potential in you, just work a little harder and practice more. Also try studying madness to become at animating that style. For instance, study the walking, you seem to have trouble there.
I hope I helped, I would say more, but I'm out of room to write more. =
wow I just logged in after like.. 5 years of being on this old account, why did you waste so much time "reviewing" a piece of shit flash that I already claimed I cared nothing about? lmfao I was 13 when I made this, and I didn't exactly put anything into it as you can see. I even mentioned that I gave up, and trust me, I gave up long before I even started animating a lot of this 23 seconds of shit.
I hope you don't think I wasn't aware at the time that this was complete rubbish, since I would have to call you a complete and utter fool since I even said "I expected this to be blammed anyway".
And no, I did NOT claim the artwork as my own, it says "By: blah..." I don't know why it says Fire Kirby... my account name is Andrex1212 lol. Regardless, to claim the artwork as my own would've been to say "Artwork and Animation done by myself" whereas I just put that the .swf was created by me. Unfortunately, as I already noted, you are extremely stupid and definitely need either glasses... or some kind of schooling that teaches common sense, learning how to read might also help.
No you're review didn't help at all because I know how to animate quite well and how to illustrate. It helps that I've been doing it for 5 years, but I certainly didn't give this any care as I already mentioned.
You just fail completely and entirely...
bs
I know you used the madness interactive source code, you can tell if you zoom in on the blood. Come on, its ok if you use it but dont claim the artwork for urself when really it was pre made by krinkels.
Blammed, and reported.
..ok not reported but dont do this bs again please(dont claim it 4 urself)
well... for one, when did I claim the artwork as my own? and another, there was absolutly nothing in this movie because the Symbols got messed up and I was just like "meh... whatever, I wanna see how quick this gets removed" and it never did ahaha. Thanks for the EXTREMLY constructive critism though :) rofl
I like the graphics....
but not the moving. It looks like BS.
I hope you keep up the good work.
thanks, it got messed up because of something with copying pre-made graphics and symbols and such... it was actually gonna be a pretty cool movie but I just gave up completly.