ummm

I think you need to seriously calm down on the cussing and it wasnt funny. I hope it wasnt supposed to be, because it was far from it.

not bad

for being your first submission this wasn't all that bad. it was kinda funny in a way. loved the audience and it was sad the rat stole his car and ran him over with it. that was funny. so I'll have to give you ten in the humor department. other then that not too bad for your first. keep up the good work and get more on the portal

not very good

this needs alot of work

((( OK )))

Well ok kinda funny but not as what i was expecting, the voices were funny but all the jibberjabber kinda killed it, the art was cool nice backrounds, but the characters could use more animation witin themselves, nice flash though, hope to see more later...

~X~

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this was pretty bad. the sound was way off, the voices sucked, it didnt make any sense, graphics were ok i guess. Hey, at least it was original.