It is pretty funny if anyone can understand what the characters are saying. Maybe subtitling would be my suggestion. The sound is pretty medicode and may not redieve any attention. The only thing that is really good about your flash movie is the character design. It is a great depiction of those Megaman characters. Of course, Sharpy is not a Megaman character but he does look like one. However, it looks like you did not have the time to use mouth movements. Maybe they are ventriloquists, lol! Overall, pretty good for the first run and I do hope you will get better the next time.
By the way, you seem to like illustrating video game characters. I have founded a forum club in Newgrounds dedicated for movies and games that features illustrated video/computer game characters. Check out my profile for more details. It is your choice to join.