Nice effort!
Beginner? Nice. I liked the poem, you're a great poet. I suggest you post your poems somewhere like fanfiction.net. Anyway, I can't use buttons in flash, so Good job. Five points.
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Seasons
Inspiring.
This was like one of those obscure short films from the Orient.
Very pretty.
jn responds:
thank you, this was my 2nd movie to pass i was learning to use buttons when i made this one :)
i agree... perfect
love'd the whole thing it was soo...... ok i dont know what the fuck i think about it it was so insane that i will never b right again. i gotta go get me some cereal.
jn responds:
thank you :)
hawt.
This sir, was different, but nice and stuff.
There are some little things to correct, like... that one thing... you know...
Anyways, it was quite hawt.
jn responds:
im sorry but i have to disagree, this movie is perfect
W00t all my 5r belong to this
Cool movie man :P
jn responds:
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