A simple e-card...I guess.
I originally made this for a friend of mine who really likes stars. It has my character from Altereality, Ramiel, and his future love interest (not saying her name yet) sitting on a cliff on a calm night. Ramiel uses his powers (explained in later episodes of Altereality) to move the stars for her. Its kinda sweet.
I guess you could use this as a simple e-card, since it is really open ended. If you'd like to use it as your own e-card to send to somebody you like, love, etc. send me an e-mail. If you want the heart to be a different shape, just say so! Enjoy!
I swear,
It's a sweet gesture towards a lover, but it's still kinda gay.
I swear, though, that the random entry link just wants me to see shitty stuff. Yes, I know, "Don't judge movies unless you can make them, blah blah blah" NEWS FLASH, I'm a critic, not an artist, don't hate me because I'm beautiful. 1/5
-Morceau
hummmmmmmmmmmm....................................
this was bad because it was not good there was nothing to show wow stars romance.............
good job not hahaha lol lol lol im gay by
sexual that is
cute, just cute
like RyanAn said, e-cards are not to comman on newgrounds. some parts of the artwork is good, but others look like a quick moment thing. nice work, can't wait for more. the whole idea of sending that as like a love letter or something is cute. like i said, nice job.
6.5
E-Cards are a rariety on Newgrounds nowadays, so when they are actually submitted, they are something to see. This is a sweet idea, with nice timing inbetween actions, and nice use of music queues. The big thing that would of improved the overall score would of been the artwork. The characters at certain times look fine, but others are way to rough. It shows a lot of promise, good luck.
Ryan
Not Bad
The music is well chosen and the animation is pretty smooth. You really overloaded the sky with stars though, it's a bit distracting (and it looks weird when 90% of them just sort of aren't there anymore in the last shot, I mean I KNOW it didn't take that many stars to make that heart). The other thing is that the continuous motion of the male character just raising and lowering his arm gets old and a little goofy pretty quick. These things don't ruin it they just keep it from being as good as it could have been.