I kinda liked it, but...
The sprites were good, and (though I don't really LIKE it) the "death metal" really fit the scene. However, the music was kind of distant sounding.
Also, your programming skills are excellent, but you need to:
A.) Check your spelling and grammar
B.) Tidy up your speech bubbles, and slow down their disappear time.
Other than those minor complaints, I really enjoyed it! Keep up the good work!