Not bad

I like what you're doing. The story is a little cliche, but still interesting. Your drawing is really top notch, the only problem is your story telling. You need to work on how you present the information, because that little closing thought wasn't very good.

Good but I feel like somthing is missing...

The graphics we're better than most but still have room for improvement but somthing seems to be missing from the story line. This flash needs somthing to give it that extra umph, to set it apart from all the rest. oh, and a little more action would be nice.

I hope this helps, good luck to you and your future movies.

3/5

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That was pretty dang interesting...put more action into it...like a giant rabbit with fangs and a ford taurus and....wait....nevermind...but anyway... i liked it ^_^

Twas OK

I think the whole style may have some potential. It has sort of an epic feel to it. I think with a lot more practice, you could be one of the forerunners of the flash people on this site. I think that when you're writing the written dialogue, you should proofread it more carefully, because a typo will distract from the story. I think there should be more action, definitely. I liked your choice of music, but I can't really say I don't like it because I kinda wrote it. But back to the style. The font did a lot to enhance the feel of the flash, and so did the old-style drawings and stuff. The guy I think should be made more carefully.

yawn...

phttt.... hee hee.... the goofy little man waddling across the screen kept me entertained for almost half a scene!

try to put more actions and less diologue. it's a movie not a book.