Could've been good

The graphics were good, but that's about it. Jokes were dumb, him floating for split seconds before falling off of the object was stupid, and the voices were just fucking retarded.

GREAT!

Those squirrel voices r hilarious!I agree with toon killer 100 percent!

We have a winner!

I loved the original version..... but THIS one ROCKS!! The added sound really adds to the humor of the piece. The delayed fall with the dress was CLASSIC!!! AK... YOU DA MAN!! This one is DEFINITELY going on my favorites list!

Not bad

I think you should put more effort in drawing the characters better (background is alright though). And get rid of that old gag in which the guy takes a while to start falling. That was nice in 50s cartoons, but it's not fun anymore.
It was an overall nice piece, though. I'd like to see your future work.

Come on then

The voices reminded me of Worms. anyway it was abit predictable sych as the guy closing the window and the truck running the guy down at the end. It was pretty average but hopefully your work will get better as this is only your 3rd submission.