cool

short, but pretty cool. i hope to see more since this is only chapter 1.

FLAWED

This is a messed up flash. Judge looks like shit. The hero looks like a fag. You should make chapter 2 before deciding to continue on stop with this 'cause how do you expect people to fall in love with this with a cliche intro and 3 seconds of action. Try again.

Not Bad...but sorry

Sorry man but you cant make your main character look like the priest from romeo and juliet and get away with a good score. I wouldnt blam it.... but i wouldnt really keep it either.

needs some work

i think that u have teh ability to make a good flash, the sequence of the peice was nice but the animation wasnt so hot. im sure u will get better in time but for example how he shot the monster coming at him was kind of lame. maby if u put that in slow motion or maby pull the arrow back with more detail (elbow bent maby his muscles bulging a little close up of his fingers letting the string go, stuff like that). the music loops were also to short and didnt really work as a loop which was kind of anoying.

pretty good..

could of been better if it was a bit longer. I thought the setting was cool, all dark and awesome. could been better if he was struggling to kill that beast, instead of killing him with one shot.