Back to the Drawing Board...
Im sure the story is decent and all and you have ok voice work, but you seriously need to go back and learn how to draw an animate again. It was just still, unanimated, badly drawn characters moving scross the screen.
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UPDATE: Go see the completed version, the way this was meant to be seen.
UPDATE(7/21/04): Tunnel sight is a bad thing. The characters will be animated next time. >_<
At long last, here it is, the TTT Prologue! This is the finished version version of "TTT Beta" so let us know what you think!
Suggestions for improvements and future episodes are highly appreciated!
--MADE
BMFMagnus responds:
I apologize to you and everyone who saw this movie. It should have been way better than this. My bad? ^_^
Anyway, the improved version is getting worked on now. Characters running and all that happy junk.
Thanks for the review.
As I have said before
Don't advertise up coming movies its just a waste of space.
What was this?!?!
The Diolauge was unamaginative and didn't flow very well. People sliding around isn't too good and they didn't seem to well drawn. Although this is a bit intriguing and i hope for more of TTT, but with more effort.
hmm...
u need to re-think ur music the matrix soundtrack is getting old
Could use some work
It obviously takes a lot of work to put together a flash movie, and some of that effort was lacking here. I'm not saying I've put any effort forth, or have any skills whatsoever, but I will freely trash other people's work anyway. First of all, the animations of the characters moving from point A to point B could use some work. The sound quality was fine, but the background music could have been a something other than a selection from the matrix. Face it, it's old, even on Matrix spoofs. The authors of this flash do get credit for their different voices though. I know this is a trailer, but I still gave low marks for violence and humour. Nobody died, and you made one joke that I almost smiled at. Interactivity credit was given for the "play" button...I think...I can't remember this movie had one and I don't play on watching that movie again.
BMFMagnus responds:
It's probably true that the Matrix music is old, but it's the one song from over 1,000 that i forced myself to listen to that worked.
As for the animation, i got too used to seeing them 'skate' that it became the norm for me. eww...
This is only a prologue for a series anyway, so it should be better by part 1.
Thanks for the review.