get some work done

colour tune up on graphics

((( B/W IS COOL )))

I like how you used a B&W style with it all, and you braught in the different audio just at the right times which made for a really good flash, and the animation was very smooth, nice job indeed, hope to see more soon...

~X~

i liked it but it would be a big hit if longer

it could use color and better looking caracters, other then that it is pretty good.

Ugly stick

Even for sticks this flash was ugly, and the story, contrived, and un-understandable, was a complete disappointment. If there were going to be more episodes the introduction should have been.. better so to say. Making the viewer want to watch another, but this just turned me off from watching any more of these.

On a small side note: Was the "Earlier that night" scene even necessary? That was certainly an absolutely worthless, gratuitous scene.

If you feel you absolutely must make another, please, take the time to put it together better.

dont take this personal but,,,

i freaking hate sticks stick fugures stick pic stick's strate up AGGGGAAAAAAA!!! it makes me so angry when i see sticks in flash everywere AGGGAAA!! it makes me crazy as F%@# it makes me wanna kill ROAR!!!!!! GRRRRR!!!